The passage is mostly clear, but there are a few areas where it can be improved for grammatical correctness and clarity. Here’s a revised version:
“Stress is a very bad thing, especially when it comes to brain strain. I stressed my brain in the past few months to the point of feeling overwhelmed.
Lesson: learn to take a break; otherwise, you might fall victim to this someday. Health is wealth.”
Here are the changes made:
1. Added a