Is this grammatically correct? “It happened to be one of the hardest experience I have witnessed so far in my life. Imagine the feeling of giving up, feeling like ending it all, tired of living, isolating yourself from everyone including family, crying an
The passage has a few grammatical errors and could benefit from some revisions for clarity and flow. Here is a corrected version:
“It happened to be one of the hardest experiences I have witnessed so far in my life. Imagine the feeling of giving up, the thought of ending it all, being tired of living, isolating yourself from everyone, including family, crying and trying to hurt yourself, feeling emotionally down, not wanting to breathe, and the feeling of seeing yourself as worthless. This is the worst of them all.”
Key changes include:
1. Changed "experience" to "experiences" to match with "one of the hardest."
2. Adjusted some phrases for parallel structure (e.g., “the thought of”).
3. Corrected "breath" to "breathe" for proper usage (breath is a noun, breathe is a verb).
4. Changed "worse" to "worst" for correct superlative form.
These changes help improve the grammatical structure and overall clarity of the passage.