Is this grammatically correct? “Stress is a very bad thing especially when it comes to brain stress. I had stressed my brain in the past months to the point of losing it. Lesson: learn to take a break, otherwise you might fall victim of this someday. Hea

The passage is mostly clear, but there are a few areas where it can be improved for grammatical correctness and clarity. Here’s a revised version: “Stress is a very bad thing, especially when it comes to brain strain. I stressed my brain in the past few months to the point of feeling overwhelmed. Lesson: learn to take a break; otherwise, you might fall victim to this someday. Health is wealth.” Here are the changes made: 1. Added a comma after "thing" in the first sentence for proper punctuation. 2. Changed "brain stress" to "brain strain" for more natural wording. 3. Changed "had stressed" to "stressed" for simplicity and clarity. 4. Added "few" for clarity in "past few months." 5. Changed "losing it" to "feeling overwhelmed" for a clearer expression of the feeling. 6. Changed "victim of this" to "victim to this" to fix the preposition usage. 7. Changed the comma before "otherwise" to a semicolon to separate the two independent clauses. These adjustments improve the readability and grammatical correctness of your original text.