Is this grammatically correct? “I fought and fought for my life that day. I was so down that all I could do was to cry, switched off my phones, couldn’t even pick my mom’s call, I hated living, I was tired, everything seemed wrong in my eyes, nothing was

The passage you provided has several grammatical issues and could benefit from some restructuring for clarity and coherence. Here’s a revised version: “I fought for my life that day. I was so down that all I could do was cry. I switched off my phone; I couldn’t even pick up my mom’s call. I hated living, I was tired, and everything seemed wrong in my eyes—nothing felt right. I wanted to be alone so I could hurt myself as much as I wanted. I wasn’t thinking about anything other than hurting myself.” ### Key Changes: 1. **Clarity and Brevity**: Removed repetition in "fought and fought." 2. **Punctuation**: Used semicolons and dashes to improve the flow and separate ideas. 3. **Verb Forms**: Changed “my phones” to “my phone” for consistency. 4. **Verb Consistency**: Changed "as much as I want" to "as much as I wanted" for tense consistency. 5. **Word Choice**: Changed “thinking of any other thing” to “thinking about anything” for naturalness. Feel free to adjust further to match your voice or style!