Is this grammatically correct? “Hi everyone! So I’m here to share my story and also to lecture you guys on something only if you’re interested. It’s 4 months already that I felt like taking my own life because of what they call ANXIETY DISORDER AND PANIC

The sentence is mostly clear, but it could benefit from some minor adjustments for clarity and flow. Here’s a revised version: “Hi everyone! I’m here to share my story and to discuss something, but only if you’re interested. It’s been 4 months since I felt like taking my own life because of what they call anxiety disorder and panic attacks. (I wouldn’t wish this on my worst enemy, even for a second.)” This revision enhances clarity and readability while maintaining the original message.