The passage you provided has several grammatical issues and could benefit from some restructuring for clarity and coherence. Here’s a revised version:
“I fought for my life that day. I was so down that all I could do was cry. I switched off my phone; I couldn’t even pick up my mom’s call. I hated living, I was tired, and everything seemed wrong in my eyes—nothing felt right. I wanted to be alone so I could hurt myself as much as I