Please I need more suggestions to SIWES coordinator Is this grammatically correct? What does it mean and can it be rephrased? SUGGESTIONS TO SIWES COORDINATORS • To give students a long time notice on their place on first posting at least one month t
Your original message has a few grammatical errors and could be clearer. Here’s a breakdown of the suggestions you provided, an explanation of their meaning, and a rephrased version:
### Original Suggestions
1. **"To give students a long time notice on their place on first posting at least one month to the time to enable due financial preparations (especially to those that would have to leave outside the school vicinity)"**
- **Meaning:** This suggests that students should be informed about their first internship placements at least one month in advance to allow them to make necessary financial arrangements, particularly for those who need to move away from the school.
2. **"To visit students during their I.T posting to encourage them if posted to environment outside school."**
- **Meaning:** This suggests that coordinators should visit students during their internship to provide support and encouragement, especially for those placed in locations away from the school.
3. **"To adjust the time spent per unit per day in each unit in other to cull lazing around by student."**
- **Meaning:** This suggests that the time allocated for each unit or activity should be adjusted to discourage students from being idle.
### Rephrased Suggestions
**Suggestions for SIWES Coordinators:**
1. Provide students with at least one month's notice about their initial internship placements to allow ample time for financial preparations, especially for those who will need to relocate outside the school vicinity.
2. Visit students during their internships to offer encouragement, particularly for those placed in environments away from the school.
3. Consider adjusting the time allocated for each unit or activity to minimize idle time for students.
This rephrased version maintains the original meaning while improving clarity and grammatical structure.