Is it correct to say " Craving for VL approval coz I'm doing my best to pass my metrics"

The phrase "Craving for VL approval coz I'm doing my best to pass my metrics" could be improved for clarity and formality. Here’s a revised version: "I am eager for VL approval because I am doing my best to meet my metrics." This revision clarifies your intent and uses "because" instead of "coz," which is more appropriate in formal or professional communication.