Is this grammatically correct? What does it mean and can it be rephrased? PROBLEMS ENCOUNTERED DURING THE SIWES PERIOD During the training, I encountered these following challenges include: • Inadequate farm implement on the farm. • Poor state of farm
The original text has a few grammatical issues. Here’s a corrected and rephrased version for clarity:
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**PROBLEMS ENCOUNTERED DURING THE SIWES PERIOD**
During the training, I encountered the following challenges:
- Inadequate farm implements on the farm.
- Poor condition of farm structures and buildings.
- Lack of farm machinery, which resulted in students performing activities manually instead of using machines.
- Absence of first aid facilities throughout the entire unit during the program.
- Delayed provision of personal protective equipment.
- Insufficient financial support from the ITF to encourage students.
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### Explanation of Changes:
1. Changed "these following challenges include" to "the following challenges."
2. Changed "implement" to "implements" for grammatical correctness since it's usually plural when referring to tools.
3. Clarified "Poor state" to "Poor condition" for better readability.
4. Changed "which" to "instead of" for clearer meaning.
5. Changed "lack of first aid facilities in the entire unit throughout the programme" to "absence of first aid facilities throughout the entire unit during the program" for clarity.
6. Changed "late provision" to "delayed provision" to enhance readability.
7. Changed "lack of financial support" to "insufficient financial support" for variation and clarity.
Overall, the corrected version maintains the original meaning while improving the grammatical structure and clarity.