Is this grammatically correct? What does it mean and can it be rephrased? I fed the birds twice a day; first in the morning a, and in the later afternoon. I adopted cleaning and packing of poultry droppings. Cleaning foot dip and introduce disinfectant
The sentences contain grammatical errors and can be improved for clarity. Here is the analysis and rephrasing:
1. **Original Sentence:**
- "I fed the birds twice a day; first in the morning a, and in the later afternoon."
- **Issues:** The "a" after "morning" is likely a typo. The phrase "in the later afternoon" is somewhat awkward and can be simplified.
**Rephrased:**
- "I fed the birds twice a day: first in the morning and then in the afternoon."
2. **Original Sentence:**
- "I adopted cleaning and packing of poultry droppings."
- **Issues:** The phrase can be clearer. It could suggest that you have started a routine involving cleaning and packing.
**Rephrased:**
- "I started cleaning and packing the poultry droppings."
3. **Original Sentence:**
- "Cleaning foot dip and introduce disinfectant with a reasonable quantity of water every morning."
- **Issues:** This sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. It mixes tenses and phrases which make it unclear.
**Rephrased:**
- "Every morning, I clean the foot dip and add disinfectant mixed with an appropriate amount of water."
Putting it all together, here is a cohesive paragraph:
"I fed the birds twice a day: first in the morning and then in the afternoon. I started cleaning and packing the poultry droppings. Every morning, I clean the foot dip and add disinfectant mixed with an appropriate amount of water."