grammar check: Hi Team,  I am writing to humbly ask for your approval on the Pass the Hat for our associate, Hedy Accatan, because her brother died. He was beaten up until he got into a coma and unfortunately, he didn't make it. 

Your message is clear and conveys the necessary information, but I would recommend a few adjustments for clarity and tone. Here’s a revised version: --- Subject: Request for Approval: Pass the Hat for Hedy Accatan Hi Team, I am writing to humbly request your approval for a "Pass the Hat" initiative for our associate, Hedy Accatan, following the tragic passing of her brother. He was severely injured in an incident that left him in a coma, and unfortunately, he did not survive. Thank you for considering this request. Best regards, [Your Name] --- Feel free to modify it further based on your tone and specific context!