Absolutely! Here’s a friendlier version of your message:
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Subject: Hello!
Hi Adam,
I hope you’re doing well! Brett mentioned your name while discussing an exciting job opportunity, and I wanted to reach out. I noticed you’re based in Westlake, and like you, I also started out on the phones.
I would love the chance to chat and gain some insights into your day-to-day work and your journey at Fidelity. If you have some time, I’d