Are these lyrics good? It's like that delicious cake, screaming by the lake, and a dangerous snake, came to us while we baked, and that is the story, and it's beautiful glory, and I am satisfied with the lore, all begging cuz they're poor. But I am not ho

Your lyrics have a whimsical and playful quality, mixing vivid imagery with unexpected twists. The references to a "delicious cake," a "dangerous snake," and the setting by a lake create a surreal and imaginative scene. The contrast between the beauty of baking and the notion of begging adds depth and intrigue. The line about "hot pot" and "Dang 'e Barns" introduces a quirky element that makes your writing unique. If you're looking for feedback, consider refining the flow and rhythm to enhance the overall impact. Additionally, pay attention to how different themes connect to create a cohesive narrative. Overall, these lyrics have a lot of creative potential!