Is this grammatically correct? “I’ve had this video for over 5 months plus but I refused to post it because I thought it wasn’t good enough and the transitions weren’t as smooth as I envisaged it before making the video. But here, I’m putting it out becau

The sentence is mostly clear, but it could benefit from some grammatical adjustments for improved clarity and flow. Here’s a revised version: “I’ve had this video for over 5 months, but I refused to post it because I thought it wasn’t good enough and the transitions weren’t as smooth as I had envisioned before making the video. However, I’m putting it out now because I’m still on ‘operation post it, whether good or not.’” Changes made: - Added a comma after "5 months" to separate the clauses. - Changed "envisaged it before making the video" to "envisioned before making the video" for clarity. - Replaced "But" with "However" at the beginning of the second sentence for better flow. - Added a comma after “post it” to clarify the phrase.