Is this grammatically correct? What does it mean and can it be rephrased? Having gone through with the SIWES program, my advice for future participant is; • They should be diligent and dedicated to whatever they do at their place of attachment. • They
Your passage is mostly clear but contains a few grammatical issues. Here’s a breakdown along with a rephrased version:
### Original Text:
"Having gone through with the SIWES program, my advice for future participant is;"
### Issues:
1. "participant" should be plural ("participants") to match "future".
2. A colon (:) is more appropriate than a semicolon (;) to introduce a list.
### Suggested Rephrasing:
"Having completed the SIWES program, my advice for future participants is as follows:"
### List of Advice:
1. They should be diligent and dedicated in their work at their place of attachment.
2. They should respect authority and strictly follow all instructions and regulations of the organization they are attached to.
3. Participants should make an effort to attend the SIWES orientation seminar to obtain essential information on how to navigate the program effectively.
4. They should be punctual and consistent in attending their place of attachment.
### Additional Tips for Future Participants:
- **Network Actively:** Build relationships with your colleagues and mentors, as this can lead to future job opportunities.
- **Ask Questions:** Don’t hesitate to seek clarification on tasks or new concepts to deepen your understanding.
- **Keep a Journal:** Document your daily experiences and what you learn; this can be beneficial for your reports and for reflection.
- **Be Proactive:** Take initiative to look for tasks or projects where you can contribute beyond your assigned duties.
- **Seek Feedback:** Regularly ask for feedback on your performance to improve continuously.
- **Stay Organized:** Manage your time effectively to balance your tasks and responsibilities.
Feel free to modify or expand upon any of these suggestions!